One day, Mr. mouse goes to South Africe. He rieds a giraffe, then slides from its neck! South Africa mouse says: " This is fun, isn't it? "

　　But Mr. Mouse says: " No, this is scary. "

      Mr. Mouse calls his wife: " Guess what!  "

      " What? "

     " I see a giraffe is taller then a kangaroo! "

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教师点评：这是ＳＫ教材四册五单元的小故事．王子亮同学的这篇习作文章虽然短小可叙述流畅自然，看！在故事的开头用 One Day ... 引出；当老鼠表示从鹿的长脖子上滑下来不好玩这一不同感受时用了转折词 but 。习作还恰到好处地将本课学习的句子用在了故事中．

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